Great work here. Interesting story, good pacing. Slight predictability in plot and some near anti-climactic build-up’s are overcome by stellar characters and fascinating, yet believable motivations and actions.
Perhaps I didn’t like it because it’s not my usual genre choice. It has a similar feel to George Orwell’s 1984. They had a lot of similarities, but I liked 1984 much better. This was a little slow-going.