I guess the story fell apart for me a bit towards the end. I enjoyed so much of it, and then I guess I expected there to be some weaving of the threads by the secondary characters. They just dropped off, but maybe I missed something.
I am BORED. 20% through, and so far there is no actual story, just a confusing trip around a plethora of thoughts in the mind of a female convict during a bus ride. The narrator (also the author) adds no depth to the story. Not sure how long I’ll last...
Too all over the place, didn’t look me ot